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I'm a person who likes the internet. I play many sports, my favorite is soccer. I am a nerd in a way. I LOVE chocolate. I like most animals. I dress uncommonly. Most things on my page are made with Paint, but not that ^^^, that was made with Pivot. Bye!!!
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8 Reviews | 5 w/ Responses
These loops were okay, but they weren't something to "Wow!" about. You could really use more work on your syncing with the other instruments. Y'know, making them sound like the REALLY belong together in harmony. The basic song was fine, but DEFINATELY wasn't perfect and DID need some work. The background drums and background synthesizers really needed to be softer and let the foreground music be the one that you're listening to the most. Also, maybe if you focused more around a certain type of insturment and sound, then you would have gotten a better result then having a whole lot of noises being thrown in there. I might be sounding like a nerd with all the critisism I'm giving you, but bettering the economy and the people in it really benifits in the long run. So, keep on making you audio and hope that it will be recognised and used someday. Possibly in a flash movie.
Y'know, most people don't like premade loop songs. But I think it's just like writing a book with words that some one else made up. Why not make your own words, huh? But then, no one would understand you and your book will get a bad rating, so just use other, more known words. Also, it's like Flash, most people don't like to see people using other people's sprites in their animation. It's like some one did the work for them. Well, what's next? Are you going to just write an entire new animating program, becuase some one else made Flash? Would that make sense? Huh, would it?
In conclusion, you did fine, but not outstanding. 5/10 2/5
Author's Response:
as I did say, it was the second song I made after I got this computer(you don't even wanna hear the first...) I know its just a loop song, but thats because I was still learning the program and such... my earlier submissions on NG are my later songs, and they're not loop songs(though I did use drum loops... w/e) Thanks for the review, I guess... lol jkjk srsly, however, thanks... Imma go play more kingdom Hearts now... lol
-OmEn
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You DEFINITLY succeed!
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I loved playing this game and is sounds almost exactly like it. The only thing I hated, [about the game, not the song] is listening to this song 70 times when going from island to island but it's good as an actual song.
Author's Response:
I loved this song, sometimes I just went to the ocean to hear that song..hehe^^ and thanks :D
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I just like the way pianos sound too. I can't really explain it.
Author's Response:
Maybe they're soothing? But could also be insanely intense at the same time?
~Pelo
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You sir, give a bad name to both music, AND PIZZA!
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Being an artist of strings and a novice piano player, myself, I have faith in this. This is one of the best audio submissions I have heard on Newgrounds in a LONG time. [Sniff] It's beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot. I don't think you had to sniff me though... xD
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I have to give you a nine, though. The voice WAS a little annoying.
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Man, how did you come up with this? Sounds like you could make a professional record. Respect, yo.
Author's Response:
I start with what I want the mood of the song to be, figure out what the initial instrument will be, and build off of that.
I think I'll stick with game design and Newgrounds and XPOGames! But I'm glad you think I could go pro!
Respected! B)
~Pelo
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